I hope you all had a great weekend.
We are continuing working on improving our sentences so they have detail and description.
Some of the areas we have been working on are:
Write how you would improve my sentence so it is a fantastic sentence.
The rain come down on the roof.
The pouring rain come down on the roof. Holly
ReplyDeleteI wonder what it sounded like Holly?
DeleteThe pouring rain is splashing on the top of the roof. Elijah
ReplyDeleteDid it make a noise?
DeleteThe wind blows away your hats. Greer
ReplyDeletethe spirhts of the weateae sperghtse onto my roop. emma
ReplyDeleteThe splashes of the water sprinkled onto my roof. Emma.
DeleteThe rain splashed fast.Joel
ReplyDeleteWhat was the rain like Joel? Splashed fast where?
DeleteThe pouring splashy rain tumbles on the roof tops while we start
ReplyDeletesnoring!!!! Gracie
Great sentence Gracie!
DeleteThe heavy rain splashing on the wet roof.
ReplyDeleteLucas
I wonder what it sounded like?
Deletethe hailing rain is crashing on the, the waterproof roof CRASH! CRASH!. Rhys
ReplyDeleteGreat sound affects Rhys - do you know what there types of words are called?
DeleteThe heavy rain came sling shoting down realy fast. micah
ReplyDeleteI like the words you have chosen to use Micah. I wonder where is landed?
DeleteI like the words you have chosen to use Micah. I wonder where is landed?
DeleteThe rain came shoting on the roof. Joel
ReplyDeleteThe rain went running down fast on the hard tall roof up in the frizzing cold air in the dark sky.Hannah.
ReplyDeleteThe rain went running down fast on the hard tall roof up in the frizzing cold air in the dark sky.Hannah.
ReplyDeleteSpish splash the wet horrible rain came straight down on the ponity roof like a herd of elephants.Dekota
ReplyDeletethe rain was porring hard out on one morning.Reid
ReplyDeleteThe pooring rain came down on the roof.Tom
ReplyDeleteI like diving into a dep pool.Joel
ReplyDelete